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Up On the Rooftop

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by Anonymous12/04/07

Excellent!

Absolutely wonderful story! Well done! A must read!

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by velvet-lizard12/27/07

Beautiful

I felt I was there watching, you described the scene so powerfully. I loved it, it is strangely moving and very erotic! Just off to have a look at the rest of your work...

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