All Comments on 'Up On the Rooftop'

by Athena_e19

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Excellent!

Absolutely wonderful story! Well done! A must read!

velvet-lizardvelvet-lizardover 16 years ago
Beautiful

I felt I was there watching, you described the scene so powerfully. I loved it, it is strangely moving and very erotic! Just off to have a look at the rest of your work...

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