Just Trying To Help Pt. 02

DG Did It Again

Here, here, Mr. Hear - - -

I looked forward to this second part all day, and indeed it puts the topping on it all. Everything you produce seems to be from your heart, and I think that's the way it should be. The Wanderer, Jake (C4) Rivers (Can't call him "Dynamite" any more)and yourself are what I consider to be the Acme(s) of Authors. Thanks, DG, for a damned fine read. Prof. Ramstein

think for coming back to us

where did you go for a while?glad you back.

Great Story!

What a feel good story! especially at this time of the year. I hate to admit it, but i had tears in my eyes a few times there.

The holiday spirit.

Thank you,DG,for a marvelous holiday story.I enjoy all your stories.Please keep writing.

Great as usual

Great story just like all your others. Keep up the good work

A good conclusion to a nice romance!

A good love story as you always deliver. Thank you for the effort and entertainmentPT

Just a little research should have been done

If a spouse has not remarried, he or she is entitled to the full social security, just as though no other spouses existed. In this case, Mollie, and the other two spouses should be entitled to the exact same benefit - the full death benefits, not pro-rated benefits.

Thank you

For not making us wait for the second part. Great story but I wouldn't expect less from you.
You are one of the few writers whose stories I look for. Never disappointed.
A fan of DG Hear's stories and pround of it.
Can't sign my name, I'm a writer too.

Great

I really enjoyed this story. Kepp up the good work.

Happy Holidays DG!!!!

What a super story for the holidays! I'm not ashamed to admit that my eyes were damp throughout. DG, this was yet another exceptionally well-written story up to your usual high standards. Yes full marks - no suggestions for improvement - to me it was perfect!. You are one of only a handful of authors I really care to read anymore. A devoted fan, Pete.

Nice job (yet again) of writing a beautiful

love story!

Nice characterization and a great sense of feelings and relationships.

I'm hoping I can get started writing again this afternoon.

Regards, Jack

Best All Around

DG I give this story thumbs up I really loved reading that ending it left me in tears all the way .
Pat

upbeat bonus part

To the most part the second part read like the bonus section in current DVD's where, under "additional features" you get extra takes or other forms of information on the main plot. That does not mean that I did not enjoy it, as I have. I just want to keep it honest; story wise most of the second part wasn't really essential to the main plot - even though as I said it did feel good to read. Thanks for the whole package!

damn you DG

That "Daddy's Little Girl" dance brought tears to my eyes. You jerk, you're forcing me to write better.

Great job DG, wonderful story. You have a talent for story telling that is rare indeed. Keep up the good work!

Terrific Story

A real tear jerker. This is one of the best stories I've read.

One of the greats

This was another sweet tale. I am reading many of your stories for a second time (or more). You never disappoint.

You are the greatest

I can spam all you entries by saying what a great writer you are and still fall short of my admiration for you words.

one of the best

Wonderful story about loving people who are going to become a warm-hearted loving family.One of the best I've read in a long time. Congratulations author.
60 year old George

lovely

Beautiful story.

THIS IS AN OUTRAGE!

This story had me crying my eyes out! It is by far the absolute best romance story I have ever read. I applaud your work! No one else has done to me what you have done, WHY?? Please consider writing professionally, you do better than great work!

lovely

just a warm fuzzy story. Loved it.

heart warming story

The best of the best! Human, warmth, family and all combine to make for the best of Loving Wives stories. RAG

The Best Story

I too couldn't stop from crying my eyes out, the wedding scene was the best scene ever written .
Pat
Atlanta,ga

Wonderful Story

I missed this one in the past. Truly a well-written romance.
Thanks DG!

I wish it was my own life

Gotta say its one of the best stories I've heard in a while, wish it were me in it. My life has been a tragedy almost as in the story, but with a different ending for now maybe it will change in the future. (still looking for my gardian angel)

Loved it, but I have one question...

I know how both Larry and Harry feel. My daughter is almost 23 and I lover her as none other. Like Kim in this story, she has been my rock when things were tough going.

The question I had is refering to the end of the story, it almost sounded like Kim did not return from Aspen. I hope this was not the case by any means.

Fairy tale quality . . . which is a compliment as I love fairy tales . . .

especcially with happy endings! But then, I have really enjoyed all your stories. I just happen to like Molly and Larry and their family story! Thank you for another great read!

Nice story. I liked it a lot. I note a couple of issues with how Social Security works.

First, death benefits are ONLY awarded to the actual wife of record at the time of death. ALL children receive EQUAL consideration and there are NO reductions in different households. In other words his benefits are not "divided" among all the children. Each child will benefit individually and equally.

MAYBE NICE GUYS DO COMPETE

and sometimes win the prize. TK U MLJ LV NV

Awesome!

Just absolutely awesome! Nothing more can, or needs to be, said. Despite the rough exterior of this old Marine I'm a hopeless romantic. When I read about someone going through devastating heartbreak and finding something better in return it warms my heart. I had pretty much the same thing as this man happen in my own life. My second wife picked me up and made life worth living. She's even a red head as well!
Thanks for a good tale that shows a good man blessed with a truly loving wife. You are a talented writer and I enjoy your work. Bless you.

I feel I almost know these people -

This one had a great realty feel to it - nice work-

Incredible coincidence does happen once in a great while.

Well thought out, designed and executed - thank you

LOVED IT

ONE OF YOUR BEST WORKS. A HAPPY TEAR.

Teriffic

I will never read your stories again. I am a fully grown mature man and I'm not supposed to cry over a silly story. I'm sending you the bill for the Kleenex.

This story rocked ...Soft and sweet in the end

ThiI thoroughly enjoyed this magnificent happy ending story. This story was very short but extremely powerful and poignant. It covered the trials and tribulations of a really good average man..widowed...divorced.. then Happily Married. The author is beyond great and supremely talented. This story was one of the absolute best I've read. I will come back and read this again and again it's that great.Thank you DG Hear!!

Any man with a daughter

wouldn't have a dry eye. Finest kind.

Enjoyed it

Well done. Thanks or the offering.

Of course, as I read this story I am struck with a thought regarding all the happy ending stories on this site... What guarantee is there that the same thing won't happen again? The vows are a nice touch, but how do we know its going to be happy ever after?

Excellent

Probably the happiest ending I've ever read. Inspiring tale of love and togetherness Thank you.

Great story!

That was the best story I ever read on this web site. And believe me, I have read a lot. Awesome!!

That was one dandy story!

"If a man wants to know what his wife would look like in twenty years, take a good look at her mother today."

Nope. I would like to think it was true but my mother in law is tall, slim and athletic. My wife is short and fat as a pig. (I love her anyway!) She takes after her fathers side of the family.

Just what every woman wants

For a guy to go down on one knee, and propose, and to then slip his DEAD WIFE'S rings onto her finger! What woman doesn't want that!

@krosis666

You can really be such an ass, sometimes!

You shouldn't think of them as his dead wife's rings (not that that would be so bad!), but as Kim's mother's rings, and for Kim to allow Molly to have them was a wonderful getsure.

The last two-thirds a bit too idyllic.

Though altogether satisfying. I'd have appreciated their happiness even more if it were earned with some shared tribulation or resolved quarrel or surprising ... well, if it included the semblance of human coping and joining, a touch of spice accommodated, a dissonance made harmonious nevertheless. We marry and appreciate each other for what each bring, both because of and despite unexpected traits.

No time for critics

Occasionally, I am confounded and for the life of me, try as I might, I can find no fault. You see, I make my living as an editor and writer; and the world has no more miserable "knit picker" than someone like me. We eds get paid handsomely for being unremitting "A'sH's... But this was a danged good show. Thanks.

@KarenE

Talk about being slow on the uptake!
How many comments on how many stories, have I openly admitted that I tend to be an ass on occasion, and when I do, I take it out on strangers on Literotica, who could seriously care less what I say, instead of those around me. Hell, I'm being an ass right now! If it makes you feel better, I have a small cock too!
Why is it that you are the only one that takes me seriously, or takes what I say personally? Just like the doctor told his patient complaining of a pain when he raised his arm above his head, to simply stop doing it. If my venting on an anonymous website bothers you, (I ain't here for the classical literature!) simply don't read my comments😋 Don't let me get you down, KarenE, someday I might leave a nice comment and someday you might (we can always dream) agree with something I say!
Am I being condescending? Probably. After all, I AM an ass😈

By the way

I actually DID like and enjoy this story. It's always a sign of a good story when, by the time you get to the end, you have completely forgotten the cheating slut at the start, whose name you can't even remember! I can recall ALL the nice characters from this story, but I would have to re read it, to remember the ex wife's name. Good job.
(Maybe I'd be less of an ASS (😉), if I stuck to reading the nice romance stories first, instead of reading all the crappy other stories first!
What do you think, KarenE? I bet you disagree!

KarenE.........

I'm sorry.😩
I love you.
🐰Here's a bunny.
I really am trying to be a nicer person. Forgive me?

A good story

I enjoyed reading your tale although the end was a bit much. Not recommended for those with diabetes.
I do have a problem with your unhealthy obssession with perfection. Like so many others on this site you use the past perfect tense (...if you would have) when the past tense (...if you had) is called for.

Well slap me on my back and call me Jack

Top story great read.Oh! Hell it's Fantastic! ★★★★★★★★★★=100 % Love you all! Bye. Greg.

Wow missed this one

I have never read this one. Not sure how I missed it from one of my favorite authors but I am happy to correct the oversight. A five star read. A pleasure to read such a well written story with great characters.
Please keep writing and I will keep reading. Even the ones I have missed!