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Intimate Thoughts of You

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by johnnyfresh03/12/08

Mmmm

This is very hot, but it also seems very real. I love that we can get inside your head... which seems to be a very interesting place.

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by lorencino03/16/08

Unrestrained joy

As I wound my way into the mind of the writer, the unrestrained joy and the unhesitating dedication to pleasure revealed in the words carry me into my own world of delight at the sheer unapologetic beauty and courage suggested by the writers desire.

Thus, as I progressed through the poem my inner smile grew warmer, bigger, and happier at the relief of feeling unrestrained joy at someone else's unrestrained expression of their unrestrained desires. Thus the last line, which on its own could be seen as either crude or bland becomes a poignant climax of deep longing vividly expressed:
I want you to fuck me so much

Magnificent!

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