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by Longriverwolf02/02/05

An honest, truthful, sad, beautiful poem

This was so honest and believable. I could feel the love and desperation; it reminds me of similar episodes in my own life. Good job as I felt the pain and lonliness, hope you keep writing because you are gifted. Peace and Best Wishes, sweet one, ME

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