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Night Of Remembrance Ch.1

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by LeBroz11/30/07

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A promising start to another prose series, leaving the poor reader dangling in suspense.

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by normal jean12/02/07

minor things...

I am curious, how does an airplane sleep? ( I assume you meant that most of the people on tha airplane, but assumptions are usually a mistake) and the lack of punctuation is not good, and I rarely say that about a poem, but you need some punctuation in this poem.

I LOVE the story you are telling though, and the haphazard way this was put together almost caused me to backspace. I am gad I didn't do that.

thanks for a very intriguing read

NJ

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