All Comments on 'A Perfect Day for a Cock'

by MungoParkIII

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
dumb

sorry, but just didn't do it for me.... erotic it wasn't, and the reading of your story needs some work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Interesting

Interesting voice pattern

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
what?

didn't even turn me on just a little. Also, if you stutter over a word, re-record so that it doesn't take away from the story. You tripped over more than a handful of words and this story is only 5 min long.

ChloeStReaganChloeStReaganabout 15 years ago
Didn't get it...

I read some of your stories and especially liked the 1992 Nissan Maxima one, you write quite well, but this somehow didn't do it for me in the least. I didn't get the point of it. :/

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