All Comments on 'She Forgot Morning'

I'm giving it a zero because there's no way I buy this as a story. If it's a part one, then I could have been far more generous; as it is, this started nowhere, unfolded an awkward narrative, and stopped.

and I'm not taking no for an answer

You wrote that the only person who ever called her "Sarah" was her grandfather, but I think you meant to write that he was the only person who ever called her "Katy" - am I right?

Strange, but intriguing .... Let's See how it goes on

Strange, but intriguing .... Let's See how it goes on