All Comments on 'Daddy's Girl'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Somewhere

It's a little bit "over the rainbow" but exciting nonetheless . It isn't too different from so many others before so you'll have to think up some new angles if you are going to continue with this tale .

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Wish it was me

Well done. I can relate to the story. I wish I could write. I have so may stories that I would love to write down. Now that I'm retired I need to at least make notes.

My real daughter is a tease. We both are. She loves to tell me stories that get to me. She only does it when her mother is gone.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Nicely done!

I liked the story. You should continue writing and posting them here. You'll improve with time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Improve With Time?

Perhaps you will improve with time but that would make you a super hot writer. This story is about as hot as they come. Loved the theme! Loved the story! Give us more!

WestcountrypervWestcountrypervabout 13 years ago
Wonderful

What a great story, really turned me on!!

blackprincess0524blackprincess0524over 8 years ago
Awesome

That was so awesome

afSolitary1964afSolitary1964about 5 years ago
Sweet

This is amazing... thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wow!

Sizzling hot!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

My daughter and I loved the story we both came so fucking hard

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