by cyber_daugter420
It's a little bit "over the rainbow" but exciting nonetheless . It isn't too different from so many others before so you'll have to think up some new angles if you are going to continue with this tale .
Well done. I can relate to the story. I wish I could write. I have so may stories that I would love to write down. Now that I'm retired I need to at least make notes.
My real daughter is a tease. We both are. She loves to tell me stories that get to me. She only does it when her mother is gone.
I liked the story. You should continue writing and posting them here. You'll improve with time.
Perhaps you will improve with time but that would make you a super hot writer. This story is about as hot as they come. Loved the theme! Loved the story! Give us more!