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Coffee Shop Magic

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by mikwmand12/02/07

THANKS!

Just wanted to say how much I enjoyed this story. As much as I enjoy my fair share of sex, it's nice to read something
that is more about the better things with the sex sort of like the icing to a cake. Wonderful story!

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by Anonymous12/02/07

thanx

thanx for the smile!!

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by woodenone40912/03/07

Thank You

Just as I had resigned myself to Scrooge syndrome you have given back the gift of Christmas.....thank you!

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by CountryMan0112/03/07

Story

Great story but i felt bad about the ending.

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by Anonymous12/13/07

The building of the plot was nice, but the transition to sexiness was nonexistent. It went from a coffee shop to an apartment, and all of a sudden they were touching and sexing each other up. Much too sudden.

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by Anonymous10/15/08

That was a beautiful story.

We get so maudlin at Christmas time, and the rest of the time we're so self-absorbed. It's a wonderful thing to see healing in this sad and broken world.

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by Anonymous11/08/11

Nice Read ...

No, a great read. The sex was actually superfluous to the real story. Readers that look for logic should read biographies, rather than fiction, just as hard core, XXX, readers should skip soft core complaints.

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