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Quirky but Quite Enjoyable
I greatly enjoyed this short, but substantive tale. It conveyed so much of the emotions Trent must have been feeling without ever directly reporting on them. Well done.
Thanks for submitting, Bob
Sad Story
Trent should have never spent his life wishing for Gabriele. I can understand an 18 year old woman making a bad decision, but there's no excuse for her not figuring it out after child #1 was born and moving on. My guess is that she enjoyed her drunken lout.
it's not just sad and depressing
it is also outright stupid! why would a man, a now-well-to-do man, at 60, be wanting to fuck a fat 60 year old woman who looks more like an 80 year old, who, when she left him 40 years ago, said he was a boring man,,,, a man who has now just found out the REAL reason she left him was because the other man had a lot more money and that HE FUCKED her silly, getting her pregnant?
why would any self-respecting, intelligent man want to fuck such a cheap, fat, ugly whore? why plow one's dick into such an ugly person? now, if she still HAD THAT BEAUTIFUL body you remembered from 40 years ago, AND YOU WANTED SOME REVENGE, then, sure, fuck her and leave the $25 dollars in the morning; but my god!, is this man a total moron or what?
the junior Senator from Virginia is over 60 and, with grown up children from his previous wives, he is starting a brand new family, with a baby with a young 30 year old Asian lawyer woman!
Why settle for a night to fuck a 60 year old pig, which looked 80, when you could fuck 20 to 30 year old beautiful women, with tighter holes? what a complete moron of a charater you created there, dear author....
W.T.F.
Well written,a sad little story but we all have someone we would love to see again and say how's it going and up your's.
Great
I've always been a firm believer of the punishment fitting the crime.
Boyd
sad
and bitter story. I pitty both chars...unfulfilled lives..
Having dinner, spending the night having sex with her and leaving that note i think were the most hurtful ways to make her feel smth similar with wut he felt many years ago and kept in his heart all that time..Giving her hope and cutting it. I think wut he did to her was more awful than wut she did to him...simply cos he was very conscient of his actions and their consecquences. And..for the previous anonymous who asked why he fucked her and not some young beauty...it's easy - this story is about feelings and closure, about ppl we let to hurt us even if they dont deserve the power we give them over our hearts. This story actually i think has nothing to do with physical having sex.
What Goes Around - Comes Around Eventually
Quite well written story of long awaited clarity and the consequence she long deserved.
Thanks for the fairness Author.
With High Regard
Loved it!
A perfect ending. I was worried he was going to be gullible but I'm glad she got what she deserved.
Superb!!!!!!!
I was totally surprised by the ending. It actually reminded me of a personal experience. If you keep writing, I'll keep reading.
revenge is sweet
and did he get revenge on the whore who had turned in to an old decrepit bag.......best thing was to leave the old slag as she was just not worth wasting time on...she thought she had it made by finding him again....how wrong she was......so may all fuck slut whores suffer...serves them right....
a sad commentary on unfullfilled lives
he has children but no contact with them out of fear they will ask for some of his money. she lives a life of regrets and self deception, still thinking her decrepit body will make up for her shallowness.
PAY BACK IS A BITCH
GUESS HE GOT HIS REVENGE ON HER
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