All Comments on 'Pandoras Box'

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LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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An advert for condoms? Why, because you use the word sheath? Tsk, tsk. Maybe by implication with its sizzling description of a place for the male to enter & explore. Getting warm in here...

twelveoonetwelveooneover 16 years ago
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take out lines 5,6,8, (the last line is deadly), see how it looks to you.

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