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The Embrace of Uvulu'ai

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/10/07

Excellent

Still my favorite writer in the entire site! Your writing style has only gotten better, although sometimes its too immersive, you must balance the sexiness and depth of the story. Please do more. maybe something with tentacles?

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by mjm20203612/10/07

Agreed...more

You do have a lot of talent in your writing style of erotica. It's not a straight shot of sex but an actual story. You give some insight into your characters and plenty of descriptions of the surroundings. Plus, you make some very nice sex scenes, as well. I love that you write about dominant women taking men to that point beyond return (especially succubi), and I am in agreement with Anonymous in UK. I would love to see you do a story with maybe tentacles. Keep up the good work.

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by xxxecil04/01/08

She should branch out

I want Uvulu'ai to expand her operation, she's really limiting herself with just the seed of one tiny village.

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