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by golfadikt212/11/07

Short

In my opinion, the story was too short. It seemed like it was just 1/2 of the first chapter.
The dialogue and the descriptions were al wonderful, but you ended the story too soon... made me feel VERY disappointed that it ended so fast!
I hope you continue the story!

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