Two Gifts in One

DO WHAT!!!!!!!

Oh please tell me that there is a second part to this...You seriously cant leave it hanging like that...Loved it by the way.

Very Enjoyable!

As always, your writing is like that little gift one receives at Christmas, that special one, the one that makes you smile like you've never smiled before.

I loved the ending, I didn't see it coming at all, what a magnificent twist to the plot. Well done, and good luck.

Please tell

me you're going to do another part??? I'm really wanting to know what happens to them all... Great story!!!

You have

to right the other part to this story you better not leave it at this...how dare you for throwing something at us like that...I LOVE IT!!! lol..but please if your going to do a second part update this fasttttt!!!!!!!!!!

NEED PART #2!

Ok...now where's the rest!!!! I need to know how it ends...please don't leave us all in suspense!!!

Vindication

The story leapt to 100% in my mind with the last paragraph. I was irked through most of the story (even though the bit about her brain telling her she could do better was written in--very well done, that), but it was all resolved very nicely (in a literary sense). Well done. As far as story writing, it needs no sequel. In fact, one would flatten and cheapen it in my mind. Left at a perfect place, I think.

Bravo!

As much as I enjoyed this story, i think a sequel would cheapen it.

The ending is so powerful and well done that it left me satisfied even tho it wasn't resolved.

PLEASE PART 2

We definitely need to see what happens! Awesome story!

Wow!

That may be the hottest group sex story I've ever read! But there was also a depth to the story that made it more. I do hope you'll write a continuing chapter or more.

This was an excellent

story, and a very unusual one for the Romance category. Personally, I don't think it needs a sequel or a second chapter. Good luck in the contest.

A well-done testing and sharing story with a nice twist. Keep up the good work.

Woah!

What an amazing story. I was worried about how this story was going to end but it was great. I just love your style of writing and can't wait to read more.

OMG

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE tell me that there's going to be another chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was hot!!!!!