Waiting for the next part !! Unusual concept warrants a follow-up, especially after the daughter's declaration in the conclusion. The possibilities are intriguing -- he could use the drug to seduce his daughter's girl-friends or perhaps he discovers that the drug didn't really work & his daughter was actually willing. I think the lack of commentary from other readers is that there might not have been enough story for them to decide whether they wanted further chapters.
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Anonymous03/14/09
very hot story
mind control pill? what a great idea. i really liked this story, but it was definitely too short.
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Next ?
Waiting for the next part !! Unusual concept warrants a follow-up, especially after the daughter's declaration in the conclusion. The possibilities are intriguing -- he could use the drug to seduce his daughter's girl-friends or perhaps he discovers that the drug didn't really work & his daughter was actually willing. I think the lack of commentary from other readers is that there might not have been enough story for them to decide whether they wanted further chapters.
very hot story
mind control pill? what a great idea. i really liked this story, but it was definitely too short.
CHapter #2
Nice Start but where is Chapter#2 to explain the Consequences and if it Really worked or was Daughter Messing with Daddy's Head.
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Give us a sequel!
Yes SEQUEL
SEQUEL SEQUEL
Giggy
Please make a part 2
Part 2 please
Real good story.. I hope you wright a part 2
Chapter#2?
Nice start now that Dad has had his Lil Girl they should move to the Country and Breed her. and maybe a Friend or 2 of hers looking to move.
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