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by NiceGuyInVa

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Unbridled_PassionUnbridled_Passionover 16 years ago
well, well

although I am a nice girl, I hope Santa Brings you your wish!

FifthFlowerFifthFlowerover 16 years ago
Nice

The fourth line was confusing and it did not sound like it fit the meter and the "wann" should be "wanna", I suppose. Otherwise it sounds like an honest wish from Santa. Hope you get it.

NiceGuyInVaNiceGuyInVaover 16 years agoAuthor
Hurry Hurry

Hurry hurry, and have a nice trip, and just to help speed you, here is my zip. 22046.

We'll have the greatest time of our lives, my tongue will go crazy with its dips and its dives.

So fly to me lovebug, all juicy with taste,

Our lust is exploding, too hot to waste.

We'll try some new moves we only dreamt of,

We'll have a friendship I know we'll both love.

So come let me lick you my tasty new friend,

I'll start at your top and go to your end.

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