All Comments on 'Love Sings the Blues'

by foehn2

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WickedEveWickedEveover 16 years ago
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This is wonderful and I'm glad you finally wrote it! :)

champagne1982champagne1982over 16 years ago
I agree

this is a fine poem and a great way to tell the story.

Thanks for sharing it at last.

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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Excellent work with the wording and skillful repetition of those four words. Can feel the ambiguity of love in this blues-tinged piece.

KOLKOREKOLKOREover 16 years ago
Simply put -You got the rythm!

I loved it very, yes very very much. Cut and paste ,in a haste, to my private list of course. Thanks!

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellover 16 years ago
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Oh wow and wow again right on the button!

twelveoonetwelveooneover 16 years ago
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A bold statement, but delivers. I don't understand why you used the stanza breaks - but I defer to the better poet. Easily the best I've read today.

WhiteWave48WhiteWave48over 16 years ago
A poetic song

I liked the way your poetic exploration seemed random but the language maintained a rhythm throughout. The stanzas appeared natural in this context.

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