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LeBrozover 16 years ago~~
A little venting at life's inequities can't hurt & may cause a moment's thoughtfulness.
twelveooneover 16 years ago*
a great first line - murder and mayhem and mines by the roadside, it would 'have been nice and saxon to continue- bodyguards blasting...L4 is a terrible line, you would have had to work very hard to save it.
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