A Christmas Dream

A Dream Come (cum?) True

Not my religion. Not my holiday. But my kind of story.
Beautifully done!!! BRAVO!!!

So Sweet

A trully romantic story. I just loved every bit of it. There really wasn't alot of hot sex but the emotions were enough to make this a great story.

terrifyingly beautiful

Great work, but it brought tears to my eyes. It looks like my wife and I will be facing a similar situation next Christmas. Our son's Army NG unit is being deployed in March and they leave for a year in Iraq in June. I can only pray that this madness will be over by then, but I'm not optimistic. We're going to try to make this holiday season as good as we possibly can, because we can't know what the future will bring.

Absolutely wonderful!

I loved it. Brings tears to an old mans eyes. Thank you for writing it. ...and they lived happily ever after.
Highest regards
DG Hear

Aww!

That was a bit of a tear-jerker. Wonderful!

Having faith always works out!

Thank you

for reminding us dreams can come true, Merry Christmas to All.

A very well done Christmas wish for all

I wish all you wrote could be true for all of the many families who feel the pain in their heart, of that special person missing. The love they want to give by looking in their eyes and pressing themselves to them. A very well done story thank you. PT

Most Beautiful

And special Story I have ever read I hope our Boys come home Soon to there families for Christmas.
Thank you MagicaPractica that was so great to read.

What a wonderful story...

... written with so much heart. Both important and tender -- thanks so much for writing! L8.

Warm and loving....

I so identify with this heroine. My husband is retired from the National Guard. I am so glad he came home to me and our sons. This is one of the most tender and loving stories I've read.

Nice, very nice

Well done, enjoyable tale recounting both the heartache and happiness that can come with Christmas.

Thank You!!!

This is the 1st lit story to ever make me cry! As the wife of a deployed soldier myself this one touched my heart. My soldier won't be home for Christmas, but we'll be together in our dreams! Your story was a wonderful and touching tribute to our military and their spouses! Thank You!!!

Wars don't last forever..

Thank you so much.. Crying like a baby and missing my soldier even more! We wont be together over Christmas but Easter he's all mine..

oh wow

crying my eyes out, not for one of my own but for friends..I think I'll have to add you to my authors list

Absolutely Beautiful!

Incredibly touching. It was a wonderful reminder of what's really important; family.

Fantastic

I have recently retired from the military and have long said that the heroes in this country are the spouses, children and other family members that support us in what we do. Most people do not understand that the families serve in the military as much as those of us that wear the uniform. Thank You

Amazing

I haven't cried like that in a while. Thank you for something like that. People remember to think of our military members overseas, but forget about all the family members left alone during deployments. My boyfriend and I are both military and are deploying at opposite times and will spend a lengthy amount of time apart, so this story hit home. That one meant a lot to me.

loved it.

Loved the personal element of this story, rich with texture.

Congrats!

Way to go on winning the Holiday Contest! Excellent entry, brought a tear to my eye!

I loved it

This is just beautiful. A well deserved win to you.

Why it was the best story for this contest

This is the hope of every wife or husband who is waiting for the spouse serving overseas to come home. Not only was the story line good but also the sexual union that happened between Naomi and Ben was sweet, tender and romantic. The writer didn't need to use the sexy slang words we readers like to read; the way she described it would make even the most prudent person hot with desire.

I love this...

I really loved this story, my boyfriend is over in iraq right now and won't be home for christmas but after the new year he is mine...

Congrats

A very well deserved win!

oh my word

YES YES YES, I laughed I cried and I CAME

Endearing!

Wonderful sweet poignant story. Revived old memories experienced long ago. Beautifully Written!

Wonderful, thank you

From a military Spouse left home this year while her husband is away, it brough wonderful tears to my eyes. You captured what it feels like to want him home so badly. Arousing, tender and real. Thank you.

Excellent

Wonderful story! It gave me goosebumps and it is very deserving of the win!!!!

My hubby

My hubby's in Iraq right now. I miss him.

Lovely!

Oh my! I loved it! It made me cry, but it was because of the beauty of it all.

Sensual

Marvelous one. Its really very sensual and has the touch of healthy love. Really deserves what it got...

Most Excellent!!!

This story kicks ass!!! 'Nuff said!

WOW

As the wife of a disabled vet my heart and wishes go out to all the spouses keeping the home fires burning this season. Stay strong and know you are supported in all you do.

A Christmas Dream

Thankyou for your story, I am an old man, I have lost my dad in another war, almost forgotten.
Yes I cried, thinking of all the lives wasted so
callously, for what ?
Thinking of all the dads out there, longing to be at home, with their loved ones. I could go on, but you get my drift.
Thankyou again.

Thanks

A great story for Christmas.

Me too =(

My husband is Navy and gone this Christmas too (and the last one!)... I just can't seem to get into the spirit except to keep the kids happy (3 and 4 years old). It's nice to read about this so I know it isn't just me suffering.

Beautiful

This is the true spirit of Christmas. I loved the way you included the song lyrics, it really added extra depth to the story.

Beautiful

This was so lovely to read. It made me cry but it conveys the spirit of the holiday.

Thanks for sharing this.

Beautiful! Thank you for sharing the lovely story.

A worthy winner!

Absolutely beautiful, heartwarming, touching - a delightful story.

Beautiful Story!

That was a wonderful story worthy of winning!

Wonderful ending

I was lost in the whole story of Christmas in the States that I forgot I was in Literotica...! Great story, gentle sex & a nice kicker a the end. Merry Christmas & a Very Happy New Year. xx Sam

Christmas in July

Very sweet story. I am so happy my husband will be home in time for the holidays!

omg!!

i cried all through it. the story seems so familiar you definately captured an army wife's trouble. i couldn't stop crying. there's so much pain and people don't really understand. but you got it. thank you so much i hope everyone reads this

Thank you

That was beautiful, thank you.

A Beautiful Story

A beautiful story, and it brings back so many memories. been there, done that. Fifty two years ago my wife pregnant with our fist child was looking at spending Christmas alone and probably the birth of our son as well. I was a soldier, stuck in East Africa. Fortunately I got a flight home and 26 hours before Christmas Day. I walked in to a home I had never seen, to a wife I treasured then and still do. Christmas 1958 was without a doubt the most memorable Christmas of my life. You see happy stories do happen

So sweet

This story is absolutely adorable and out of the hundreds of works I've read on here, this is still one of my favorites.

What a wonderful story!

That was such a touching story! Makes me miss the soldier I lost in this horrible war! Thanks for writing that story! Makes me believe in miracles again.

I feel stupid

Most of the stories on here make me feel well putting it bluntly horny but this one made me cry. I have tears rolling down my cheek once I read the last line.