Maggie May: jack_straw

Great Read!

Well written and a joy to read.

Great read, and it brought back a lot of great and not so great memories.

Thanks.

A nice story with sex

It was well written as always. You did entertain and that is the first criteria of a good story. Thank you for your effort.

Well Done, Again

Jack, once again a well written submission. But, one detail that you missed...USF hasn't had a Football program since 1951...

Don Alum

Impressive!!!

So very impressive Jack! I really love your stories that have a happy but kinda sad ending. You have given us another quality romantic story with more than a little heartache. Impressive and beautifully written – with a plot very different from all the other "Maggie Mae" contributions! Pete.

Very Good, But Not particularly erotic

very interesting story. I enjoyed the musical knowledge you obviously have, and the descriptions of being a deadhead and following a band on tour were very convincing. The only problem with it was i didn't find it all that erotic. the scenes with sex were good, but not very long or descriptive. However, as i also enjoy a lot of sixties music i found the story interesting, and i liked the way you portrayed your character as outgrowing the full hippy experience, as many actual hippies did. Fine storytelling, i suspect because you drew on your own experiences and emotions to some degree.