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by Anonymous

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by My Erotic Trail12/09/07

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thanks for the read!

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by WhiteWave4812/10/07

Ideas

I was fascinated by some of your ideas, but distracted by the rhyme and 'almost rhyme'. The whole piece came close to capturing a truly poetic feeling in its underlying freedom.

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by tazz31705/15/12

JUST SAY NO AND MEAN IT

dont allow baddies into your existence, TK U MLJ LV NV

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