All Comments on 'La Neena'll Be Ass Whipped'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Who taught you how to write?

I could not even get through this story, it reads like a script, not a story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Another Sick creep trying to write a tale about

his being ass fucked

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
weird but interesting

i think it's fair to say that i don't understand this story either, nor your other one "The Conversation". but i kind of liked it too; you have a very quirky and unusual writing style. i'm curious to see what happens with the rest of the stories, and how much of the quirkiness is ever explained.

maybe literotica isn't the place for your experimental writings; obviously i don't mind, but you'll probably keep getting abuse from people who just can't handle it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
dont quit your day job!

too poorly written to get even halfway through it

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