I could not even get through this story, it reads like a script, not a story!
by
Anonymous12/26/07
Another Sick creep trying to write a tale about
his being ass fucked
by
Anonymous01/04/08
weird but interesting
i think it's fair to say that i don't understand this story either, nor your other one "The Conversation". but i kind of liked it too; you have a very quirky and unusual writing style. i'm curious to see what happens with the rest of the stories, and how much of the quirkiness is ever explained.
maybe literotica isn't the place for your experimental writings; obviously i don't mind, but you'll probably keep getting abuse from people who just can't handle it.
English
Who taught you how to write?
I could not even get through this story, it reads like a script, not a story!
Another Sick creep trying to write a tale about
his being ass fucked
weird but interesting
i think it's fair to say that i don't understand this story either, nor your other one "The Conversation". but i kind of liked it too; you have a very quirky and unusual writing style. i'm curious to see what happens with the rest of the stories, and how much of the quirkiness is ever explained.
maybe literotica isn't the place for your experimental writings; obviously i don't mind, but you'll probably keep getting abuse from people who just can't handle it.
dont quit your day job!
too poorly written to get even halfway through it
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