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12/07 Spring Wind

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by Anonymous

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by LeBroz12/09/07

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Sounds like a chill wind blowing there in NZ late into the season.

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by twelveoone12/09/07

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for what it is, it is nice, effective closer.

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by Amyfriend12/09/07

Short and

to the point. It stirs up some vivid images.

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by WickedEve12/10/07

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I really like this one, wso. Love the image of black blossoms caught in her hair.

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by ElmerGlew12/11/07

Very nice.

The image of the wind causing the hair to "bloom" (how I read this) is neatly done. I don't understand the reasoning behind putting the date in the title.

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