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A Night in the Sun
This is a well-framed story. The amount of set-up was proportioned well to the amount of sexual content, and the tension was well-written. The title is also nice. I enjoyed it, thanks.
Nicely play
Intresting fromat, nice play and use of words. Lovely flow to keep you intrested. Well done.
Detail
I loved it. The build up was fantastic but try adding a little more detail in to make the entire story fantastic.
Reminds me of a game I used to play
As a child, I would play pretend games with elaborate plots, and this sunshine woman reminds me of one of my games.
liquor dispenser
i like getting my nectar from that place, too!
One "HOT" story!
I could feel the warmth.
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