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One Night Outside

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by WickedEve12/13/07

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The last line works perfectly. Changes the mood of the poem. Mentioned on the new poems review thread on the literotica poetry forum.

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by LeBroz12/15/07

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A hard life, walking down the street in that weather. Maybe another time...

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by KOLKORE12/16/07

Commune with nature at the city

I love urban and nature obsrevation poems. Who says you have to go to the "mountains" or the glorious but out of reach to most most of the time beach resorts to contemplate on nature. You literally delved into nature then so humanly had to move out. A poem about hot cider and nature through the window should follow...

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