by P_V
Maybe "Val" needs to give "Sara" a chance to clean up a little (or maybe he'd like to help with this, as well?) while he sets up her next torture... plan to really get some information out of her this time? >:)
~A Loving Fan
Keep on writing. I read this story once a year ago and have always remembered it and lusted after it. Now that I've found it again, I forgot how erotic it was... and I want more!
now if val really wants to get information out of her, try strapping her down to a sybian for awhille...
I read it years ago and have fantasised about it ever since. It makes me really hot, the idea of being tied down and having many many orgasms...
I just can't wait to see what the next stage is.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more! these stories turn me on more than anything i've ever read or watched. i NEED more!
still in the after effects of the orgasm i got from your story... please write more.. your amazing!!! brilliant.. i love you!
I've just discovered your writing on Lit and I'm so glad I didn't give up. You are what I knew had to be here!
Your description of what it can be like for women to pleasure each other, the pleasures of sharing control - although a few errors in editing have slipped through - I do believe this series to be the best I have read.
Your writing has inspired me tonight, and for that I thank you! (I'm sure my boyfriend will send his gratitude along shortly as well.) I look forward to reading more of your work. Thanks again,
An insatiable lady
I have only one word for this series. Excellent! Thanks for sharing.
geepers yee cant just leave us readers, like this .you must finnish the story .bring us to a ending
it was quick and brutal and took no account of her feelings. Let's face it, anyone can get tender, loving sex.
I believe this may be the best story I've ever read here! Please continue! I have to know what else she goes through (maybe a feel-good spanking or more than one man)! I need to know how this story ends (hopefully after many, many more chapters)!
I have really enjoyed what I have read so far in this series, hope it will get a continuation. I can't help wondering where this story line will go? Is it truly a competitor trying to extract information, OR is it the very company she works for testing her loyalty before promoting her to the inner circle?
I just want to say, that I am looking forward to next chapter! And that this torture doesn't seem like torture at all :p pure pleasure. Please keep going! I need to know how the torture will turn out!