All Comments on 'Bite Me'

Help this writer find an editor... You need one in a serious no nonsense kind of way.

I agree that you need an editor. I also enjoyed your story very much and I hope you continue it soon.

I agree there were quite a few typos, BUT the story is good and I think has awesome potential. Do you have plans on adding to this? I can't be the only one who wants to see where it goes!!!

Anyways... write more!

-Jillian

I can't stop reading it. Although I still refuse to read the first part brat. Rather takes away the effect of the orgasm if I get that jealous.

But this means its entirely your fault that I've been orgasming almost non-stop for the past hour.

Please finish the story.