Newfound Love Ch. 04

HotDamn!!!!

About time, seems like I have been waiting a small lifetime for this story, please add more to it

So Happy!

Been faithfully checking to see when an update would post. Glad when I saw this one. Can't wait for the next installment! =)

We Missed You

Welcome back, hot update. Now, when can we get an updated on Mr. Right?

Great!!!

I can't wait to read the next chapter! Glad you are back!!!

Welcome Back Angelic

I am so happy to see you posting again, I like other's have been waiting for more on this one. Love your stories and Love where this one is going.. Hope the next chapter comes soon, Keep posting!

About time!

So happy to see your writing again

Been a such a long time since u wrote anything and am happy that your back.... i was so excited to see your new story....to which is really good...one the best ive read on here.... and i cant wait to see what happens next!!!!

About Time

Loved the story hope we i dont have to wait long for the next installment and please continue with Mr. Right

Yeah Baby!

Love it!!!!!!! So gald you update, more on this couple please, they are fire together!!!!!

Corny!

Hate to say it but this is a helluva cheesy storyline - what with the "his princess" and "I want to make her mine tonight"!! LOL! Who really talks like this, please?! Also whats wit5h him suddenly calling her "V" or "Tavia"? Look I enjoy interracial romances as well as the next person but this is wayyy corny, totally channeling mills and boon novels with a little spicy extra (more sexually explicit.)And why oh why do they all say "I'm gonna cum?" With come spelt as "cum"?
Jeez,these stories are all begining to sound the same.
Sorry but this story is not about to win any awards.

Preference for the mature man

I think this character has really filled the bill...don't you?
Love him and coupled with a glass of Riesling and Rick James "Cold blooded" strumming in the background is making for a lovely hair swinging evening ...solo....or a deux.

Some reality

Great to see you understand a guy can't "get it up" right after ejaculating like too many others love to resume with.

Great build up revealing their thinking and how they really felt about each other, and I love how they're enjoying each other now. I'm looking forward to reading Ch. 5 and seeing what he does with her. :)