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Seven Minutes Shy of Ten Hours

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by LeBroz12/12/07

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This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.


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by ElmerGlew12/12/07

This one seems uneven to me.

The early stanzas read almost as prose and I find them, frankly, a little dull. But that closing stanza is marvelous and makes the poem. Beautiful image.

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by twelveoone12/16/07

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the call on it being a little too prose-like, dead on, I like the tone, though it was something like a bit of cinnamon, in the chili.

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