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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/21/07

I would of loved to seen the sisters turned into vampires insteas.

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by mBrow12/22/07

More vamps!

Agreed. We romantics would prefer seduction and turning over gore and death. But thanks for the story.

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by Anonymous03/19/09

maybe too quick of a death

maybe if it was more interesting, with dialogue or at least a little longer before the first sister suddenly died, it would have been better, but other than that it was awesome.

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by JoshuaD11/24/09

Too short

Good story but was too short.

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