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by Anonymous12/23/07

Nice first job - more

Thought it was a fun read and well written -- continue the story!

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by Anonymous04/04/08

Had real potential

But what happens when her blouse and bra come off? He looks; that's what. What about her being proud of her tits? What about her asking him how he likes them? What about her showing him how she plays with them? What about her getting her to play with them with descriptions of how it feels to her and to him? What about her telling him how to get her off and THEN, as a reward, giving him the BJ?

Details. Details. Details.

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by Anonymous12/17/14

Finish

Good story but finish it

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