All Comments on 'Sailing with Mixed Emotions'

by writerscramp4me

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floaturboatfloaturboatover 16 years ago
great start

Great start for hot story. I gave you a high vote on the assumption this will be continued. Most on this site however, tend withhold the highest votes until they read the money scenes in story. I enjoyed your writing style and the premise of the story is very interesting.

please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Can not wait

I can not wait for the sequels

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Don't stop!

This is the beginning of a fabulous story. Don't stop now, PLEASE.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Next instalment

I really hope you carry on with the story will look forward to it with antisipation. The story is great so far.

TobyPTobyPover 16 years ago
Damn good start!

Keep going!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Good start

It looks like you're off to a good start. Your writing skills so far are pretty good. Take your time, write a great story, and let's find out where this 4 way cruise takes us.

oldwayneoldwayneover 16 years ago
Okay...what's next?

Good start, too brief! I like your style and am anxious to see where this goes.

SambranoSambranoover 16 years ago
Kate, Kathy, Karen, where's KIM?

Thank goodness it was a very short story. Too many k's, though for me to keep track of.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
A

Pretty good start. Pure fiction or maybe the characters are based on your wife and her family? I enjoy the more petite women, and the "normal" size of your own cock. Tends to keep things "real". Will your wife be reading this or helping you with some of the descriptions of female/female sex?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Very Good

PLEASE continue with your story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Finish It.

You should have finished it before submitting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
writerscramp

Don't you just hate it, when the creative juices stop flowing in the middle of an mental erection like ...like an empty bottle of cialis?

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
oh

writer's block!

Ducky7Ducky7almost 15 years ago
I love to sail

OK, now we are hooked, so where is the rest of the story?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Yep

Yep, I hated it; worst thing I hated was the lack of followup...

GirlWatchinGirlWatchinover 11 years ago
Great start

Looking forward to seeing more of this story.

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