Great start for hot story. I gave you a high vote on the assumption this will be continued. Most on this site however, tend withhold the highest votes until they read the money scenes in story. I enjoyed your writing style and the premise of the story is very interesting.
please continue
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Anonymous12/21/07
Can not wait
I can not wait for the sequels
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Anonymous12/21/07
Don't stop!
This is the beginning of a fabulous story. Don't stop now, PLEASE.
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Anonymous12/21/07
Next instalment
I really hope you carry on with the story will look forward to it with antisipation. The story is great so far.
It looks like you're off to a good start. Your writing skills so far are pretty good. Take your time, write a great story, and let's find out where this 4 way cruise takes us.
Thank goodness it was a very short story. Too many k's, though for me to keep track of.
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Anonymous12/22/07
A
Pretty good start. Pure fiction or maybe the characters are based on your wife and her family? I enjoy the more petite women, and the "normal" size of your own cock. Tends to keep things "real". Will your wife be reading this or helping you with some of the descriptions of female/female sex?
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Anonymous12/22/07
Very Good
PLEASE continue with your story
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Anonymous06/28/08
Finish It.
You should have finished it before submitting.
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Anonymous09/11/08
writerscramp
Don't you just hate it, when the creative juices stop flowing in the middle of an mental erection like ...like an empty bottle of cialis?
English
great start
Great start for hot story. I gave you a high vote on the assumption this will be continued. Most on this site however, tend withhold the highest votes until they read the money scenes in story. I enjoyed your writing style and the premise of the story is very interesting.
please continue
Can not wait
I can not wait for the sequels
Don't stop!
This is the beginning of a fabulous story. Don't stop now, PLEASE.
Next instalment
I really hope you carry on with the story will look forward to it with antisipation. The story is great so far.
Damn good start!
Keep going!
Good start
It looks like you're off to a good start. Your writing skills so far are pretty good. Take your time, write a great story, and let's find out where this 4 way cruise takes us.
Okay...what's next?
Good start, too brief! I like your style and am anxious to see where this goes.
Kate, Kathy, Karen, where's KIM?
Thank goodness it was a very short story. Too many k's, though for me to keep track of.
A
Pretty good start. Pure fiction or maybe the characters are based on your wife and her family? I enjoy the more petite women, and the "normal" size of your own cock. Tends to keep things "real". Will your wife be reading this or helping you with some of the descriptions of female/female sex?
Very Good
PLEASE continue with your story
Finish It.
You should have finished it before submitting.
writerscramp
Don't you just hate it, when the creative juices stop flowing in the middle of an mental erection like ...like an empty bottle of cialis?
oh
writer's block!
I love to sail
OK, now we are hooked, so where is the rest of the story?
Yep
Yep, I hated it; worst thing I hated was the lack of followup...
Great start
Looking forward to seeing more of this story.
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