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by champagne198212/14/07

I love

the conversational tones you use in your poetry. It makes the scene live, in my view.

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by LeBroz12/14/07

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I get the image of a husband playing bad when the wife has some of her friends over and the spirit of the group is rattled. That's what poetry is about, mostly creating an image, a feeling, not so much the telling of a story.

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by lobomao12/14/07

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In such insatable mysteries we are lost;


As a doer unknowing in the second act-


Only in our afters do we know the cost,


When our fictions have become our fact

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