Some of your dialogue was a bit unrealistic but for a fantasy stroke story, it did what it set out to do. Entertain. Please ignore any cretinous comments from the "Stupid Cuck story" - "another wimp husband" brigade. They are all gay.
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It was quite good.
Some of your dialogue was a bit unrealistic but for a fantasy stroke story, it did what it set out to do. Entertain. Please ignore any cretinous comments from the "Stupid Cuck story" - "another wimp husband" brigade. They are all gay.
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