You could have had a little more in it. It could have been drawn out a little more with some more of the life on the island. Still, for being a story on island stranding, it was good. (Roticwizard)
Ok sort of story except A spark will NOT ignite diesel an elementary mistake
Diesel has to be atomized to burn. it is one of the most stable fuels.
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Amuzing; but it was missing something
You could have had a little more in it. It could have been drawn out a little more with some more of the life on the island. Still, for being a story on island stranding, it was good. (Roticwizard)
Duh
Ok sort of story except
A spark will NOT ignite diesel
an elementary mistake
Diesel fuel
Diesel has to be atomized to burn. it is one of the most stable fuels.
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