All Comments on 'Leader of the Pack Ch. 18'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Still loving it!

So happy to see another chapter. Keep up the great work - sex or no sex!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
I cant wait!!

For more of these characters... I also cant wait for Aislinn to have "wittens"! A whole litter of them! Keep these characters going PULLLEEEZZZEE!!! im hooked!

BlazeWolfNightBlazeWolfNightover 16 years ago
More please!

sex or no sex, it's a great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Honestly

who needs sex when you have a story that's this good!

NorCalGirlNorCalGirlover 16 years ago
Sometimes you need a transition chapter

Cullen definitely needed to spend a lot of time taking care of business and tying up some loose ends. And Aislinn also needed to begin trying to assimilate into the pack and getting the other weres used to her presence, since she's not planning on going anywhere.<br><br>

Jenna and Moan both sound like trouble. I don't predict the peace to last very long! <br><br>

I'm amazed at your output - thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
ok it is 3 in the morning....

and I have just finished reading all 18 chapters of your story so far, you have done a great job building your characters... it reads like a Laurel Harrington, Maygie Shayne book... awesome... I will keep reading if you keep writing... the only suggestion I would make is run it through a text editor to catch a few of the typos... but all in all it is fantastic.

Wonderful job :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
sex --- no sex ? .... Doesnt even matter...

I love this story now ... And will love it if you would stop writing sex scenes ...

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
No sex needed

This story is fantastic w/o the sex. It makes it more real! Keep up the great work. I cannot wait to get my little ones to bed at night. I go right to the computer to look for new chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Exciting Chapter

I can't wait to see what comes next. Please more. I will read whatever you write. LOVE it

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
There was no sex in this are you sure heheh

There is sex in just the way these two think of each other however actual sex or not this is wonderful an I can't wait to get more this is such a well written story i have gone back to re read it several times moe please more. Oh an a litter would be so wonderful just to see how cullen would handel that heheh.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Very Well!

Even without the sex.

Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
still love it

There doesnt have to be sex to be a good chapter. The way those two think of each other and the excitment and supense is enough to keep me amped up heehee

This is a wonderful story in so many aspects

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
BEST WERE series ever

love ur writing... i would buy this book like five times no just 4 me but 4 my frinds too

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
WoW! :D

i love the way you their love for eachother.this is the most romantic story i've ever read

raven616raven616about 14 years ago

I loved this story so far really... but I can't understand a few people saying write this without sex.

I think without sex this story would be flat. I mean these creatures are more passionate than any human. But we are also lucky that there are people who are a bit more passionate in their relationship...Amen to that.

You don't have to add sex after sex...you know. and it doesn't have to have sex scene in each chapter...I'm not saying less sex...NO please don't do that and I'm not that sex freak...you have those days...you know, what I want to say is that the sex scenes makes this story keep going. honestly I don't see any romance relationship without sex...that would be a boring life..

thank you

hourihourialmost 13 years ago

Excellent storytelling as usual. Thank you for sharing your world with us!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Uh huh...no sex....scene set up...ok...good scene set up. No sex even on the bad guys side. Right. Next?!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

No sex is fine by me, just makes the story all the more interesting, 5 stars as usual.

LynLeoLynLeoalmost 12 years ago
punishment

Oh, good, they were punished, and strongly but appropriately. All is well.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Nice character development

Your story is CUMpelling

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
CUMpelling...?

It'd have to actually have sex in it to be remotely close to CUMpelling!

STILL bored but I keep reading hoping the next fucking chapter sexes it up some or gets a little more exciting!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Enjoying this story

I'm really enjoying this story. I was frustrated when they were not on speaking terms and getting angry at each other. But loved the chase sex scene!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Please vote?

How about please finish the story

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