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Restitution?
Had he gone to trial he **MIGHT** have done better, but it could have gone either way depending on the mood of the jurors or the judge.
I as far as I am concerned he did the world a favor by ridding it of an arrogant smirking jackass. I would suspect his friends might have tightened up their act as a result of seeing (from their point of view) the unprovoked violence. One can only hope.
Some claim the ending was too abrupt, but a "happily ever after" ending gets worn down if it is examined too long. All was said that needed to be said in order for the story to be complete. Thanks for not dragging it out. Possibly some of the complaints were because they were enjoying what you wrote and didn't want to stop reading and thereby risk having to read lesser work. There's a lot of it out there, you know.
This is two in a row of yours that have, despite my trepidation, been quite uplifting and positive. Thank you.
Too short
Ok but really could have done with more on this one.
Thanks KarenE for the perspective
A newly pregnant wife is outside with 3 assholes with one of them feeling her up at a party where her husband is there and she's innocent? Not a chance. She had to be either boffing one (or all) of these guys or she's the dumbest woman on the planet. It's amazing that the DNA proved that he was the father. Must be one of his little guys swam in and got to her before any of the asshole swimmers. I liked the overall story concept, but the details were somewhat unbelievable.
another good story
but ended too sudden...what happened after he saw Chrissy...did they get together or what....you needed to finish the story off and if there was a happy ending
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