All Comments on 'Dark Acolyte Ch. 02'

Very good job! Looking forward to the next chapters!<br><br>Have always wondered what would happen should a warlock's spell go wrong, hehehe...

Loved it. Just the kind of descriptions that really turn me on, with an intruiging storyline. Can't wait for more.

your shakespearean grammer's a bit shoddy. your = thy and yours = thine. Aside from my grammer-nazi quibbles, this is written well and the plot is...compelling...

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