All Comments on 'Hades Ch. 04'

I love the way you are retelling it..you know how to show the powerful emotions of a person it is utterly captivating if all you work is as amazing as these 4 chapters you need to get out there and publish some serious books..i would read them...I love it so far please write more soon...your one of the best..

This story just gets better & better. I can't wait for your next chapter! Please update soon!

Wow-I loved it. Put the ending soon,I hope U post it soon. Its soooo great!!!!!!

fantastic! more please :-)

Please give us the next chapter asap, I'm waiting very eagerly. This is a very well written story, loved reading the whole chapters. Will be back everyday just to see if you're updating.

What the title said! I'd like to hear to hear more.

please write more

I love Greek mythology, especially the Persephone story and this one is just great! Well written, well developed characters and a great plot. Please keep writing! I can't wait for the next installment! Thank you so much for sharing your work with us!

that you didn't continue this story! It's so horrible ending it like this. I hope to another attachment soon, although I probably shouldn't bother get my hopes up.

Please continue this story!!!

Wow, I am absolutlly loving this story and I really hope you choose to continue it, that last line from Hades is one heck of a cliff hanger! Please don't leave us dangling for too long!!

This story is incredible, it really pulls you in! I hope there's more coming!

I really liked this story! I have been wanting to read an erotic version of the Persephone story for a while now, and this is excellent. If you made Hades a tiny bit more dominant toward her and added a touch of BDSM, this story would be perfect. PLEASE!!!! write more!

Please continue this, it's a great read!

-senzie

This is fabulous! Please do not stop.

Persephone and Hade's story has always been one of my absolute favorites.

I love the imagery that you create with your words.

Excellent work! Please continue, I am eager to see how the plot unfolds.

I've returned several times since this story has been put out only to discover it still didn't have an ending. Please, please PLEASE continue!! I adore this myth, along with your retelling of it. It's absolutely lovely. AND it's just getting to the good stuff. I hunger to see more with Hades and Kore.

this is so good! it's so sad that it isn't finished and probably won't ever be. I seriously love this though

pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

continue the story

Amazing story...like so many other readers before me, I sincerely hope you complete your tale. You describe your thoughts so well. Enticing ones imagination to simply open and enjoy. Perhaps we will see you back here in the future. I most certainly will keep an eye out for you.

Life is like an ever winding stream. It meanders its way through the many currents of your life.

May It Flow On....

I love your writing style!

please continue :)

Im hoping that you have been writting more of this encaptulating story. Perhas you will submit another chapter soon

Love it, I know it's been 5 years but please continue!!!

Please write more! This is wonderful!!

I am hooked and it sounds like it is just getting to the good part!!!

Please for the love of the gods/goddesses finish this amazing tale!