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by LeBroz12/20/07

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I can just hear this one being read aloud and those last four lines really do it with their ironic meaning. Drink up.

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by UnderYourSpell12/23/07

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What a journey!

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by twelveoone12/23/07

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Hack, not!Killer lines:near met my Maker/
on the crapper/
back of some jazzy joint./ I was perplexed by jazzy at first, seems to work.

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