brilliant start, lovely use of food and descriptions, but what was all the nonsense bout the cabin and dog?
I'm glad i was late finding this series, so I can read one right after another! Great work!
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started great...but soon tailed off
brilliant start, lovely use of food and descriptions, but what was all the nonsense bout the cabin and dog?
This series is great!
I'm glad i was late finding this series, so I can read one right after another! Great work!
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