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This poem was mentioned in Friday's New Poems Reviews.
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Following the metaphysical tradition…
And I profess to be a sucker for this style… I would have reworked though the last stanza to go more smoothly with the rest of the poem. It’s his love to her or their love to each other which fills all that cosmic space, not her physical presence I presume…
Poetry: The Last Refuge Of An Undisciplined Writer
A writer who can't focus generates drivel like this. How pathetic!
Anonymous comments:The Last Refuge of a Coward
If this is drivel...please, Sir! May I have some more? Mmm Mmm delicious! D.
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Pathetic the poor person with no poetry in his/her soul .. I feel sorry for those that cannot see or feel it.
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if this had continued in the same vein as the first eight lines, anon bore would have had a point. Next nine (like spaces - ROFL) sub atomic physics, last two wrapped up with love.
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