Nora Gets It (Finally!)

Hey! Naughtycakes!

Great first story. I also read your poems. I think I'm in love.

Fuck me?

This is so naughty it's like stuffing myself with cake.

terrible!

Terribly funny, terribly sexy and terribly wicked. Just loved it.

A bit of a tease, isn't it?

Vividly written, wonderfully naughty, but something of a tease since we're left hanging at the very end without the sexual payoff of orgasm - for the characters or the reader! Though, I think one of the real strengths of the story is the tease, since it's the very embodiment of the main character Nora. I think we've all known this girl at one time or another, the merciless cockteaser, so the story has a character that helps ground it in the realm of reality. And the hottest of fantasies are the ones that involve real people in unlikely - but plausible - scenarios. While there are places in the story that could be expanded, and some of the connections/interactions between the characters could be tweaked to increase the sexual tension, it's a hot little story despite the anti-climactic cliffhanger ending. But I suppose that keeps us hungry for me, eh? ;)

shower time

its shower time,warm and slow

Great Read!

You need to write more!

Great start

Would like to see this one finished! :)

I can't believe you've left us all hanging!

Great story though, but really want to see how it ends.

Slap my Ass

Wow, nicely done, I'm still hard from reading it. Please don't stop!

And...

WTF!!! Where's the END??? Come ON, people... Can't you see by the blue hue of my balls that I need to read the rest of this frickin' story? Sheesh!

mmm that was hot. im feeling really wet after reading it. hope you post a sequel