All Comments on 'Cuntry Club'

by MungoParkIII

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Bridget69Bridget69over 16 years ago
Where...

can I sign up for membership to this club? lol! Great story and also love the clever title.

mrjones502003mrjones502003about 16 years ago
but, why?

you are a talented writer and i salute your skill, but when i finished the story i was left with the question; why do these women do this? and further, what was the reason for telling us what they do if there's no attempt to give us even a glimpse into their motivation? you've crafted a very clever lesbian scene but the rest of it feels like just an excuse for writing a sex scene. stories, even dirty one like we write here, have to have an angle. next time, consider the characters in more depth. you may find the process of discovery as you flesh out these people as entertaining for you, the writer, as it will be for us, your readers.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Instant action jerk-of story....

NEXT!

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