All Comments on 'Everything You Want Ch. 05'

it was a wonderful story which captivated me

Great story. I just love the family interactions and the happy endings. Keep up the great work

I really enjoyed this story and the conclusion to the Hartley girls. Hope it will continue now that you introduced Angie's partner Sean. Keep up the great writing. I love your stories.

Great ending!!!!

I reaaly liked tthe story up to this last chpt.... then it seemed rushed. I'' admit I'm a bit disappointed in it...would've thought connor would be more romantic and less.... I don't knw... harsh... aggressive?

I gotta tell ya, it was definitely worth the wait! I loved the series and the last two chapters were HOT! You're one of my faves.

<b><big> I TOTALLY FELL IN LOVE WIH THIS STORY LINE. I HOPE THAT WITH NINA AND SEAN THAT IT WILL PRODUCE ANOTHER STORY AND GET UPDATES IN THEIRS OF ANGIE/CONNY AND ROXIE/DEX. EXCELLENT WRITING. THANX SO MUCH!!!!!!!!</B></BIG>

...with the characters! Thank you for a great read and I can\\\'t wait for more by you!

I love that they were best friends first.

Pulse of My Heart would have been awesome title. I loved the story. Everything was so HOT...keep up the good work.

That was a great story i just love the Hartley sisters and Ange and Conner are just perfect together great work.

I loved every chapter of this story. Many parts reminded me of myself and my boyfriend. I was into this chapter also until the pierced nipples. Ruined it for me.

Really loved this story.What a stud Conner is.

i can NEVER be tired of reading this story. Beautifully written

You are a fantastic author. OMG! That was an amazing story.

Happiness at last. Sometimes what we are looking for is right under our nose or right before our eyes.

This entire story was amazing. It had everything, comedy, drama, romance, suspense. I absolutely loved it. Thank you.

Her love finally has come along.......Angie could never be happy with Charlie and he knew it, she never looked at him like she did Connor, and he finally did the right thing and walked away! I feel sorry for Charlie, but I am so very happy for Connor. He finally stepped up and became the man he needed to be for Angie! To be the "Pulse of his heart!" Damn that is deep!

the story was great this story reminds me of me and my love right now everything happend for a reason and a lil happiness is all everyone need but somethime we let things hold us back GREAT STORY LOVE

Loved the ups and downs and that sometimes love does prevail.

Conner and Angela are just too cute!! Great story and five stars for every chapter!

Absolutely love this story! This is my favorite out of the series. Funny, sexy & kinky....shoot. He is so deep. I want me a Connor now.

A girl can dream :-)

Much to short! Love these two. Nice work.

You are a wonderful writer, love this story.

Charlie just kind of weaseled out of things and Connor was too much of an asshole about getting together. I definitely wanked though ;)

Good story. Well written, well paced and well ended. Also thanks for not dragging it with unecessary drama and shit. like some others author like to do. Would like to read about Dex and Roxies

First.. I thought Conner was super hot I even wanted him and second the writing was great really hooked me... kudos

So good omg, I didn't want it to end but I'm so happy their together and engaged

Finally they got together. Even though Connor was kinda being a jack when he finally made the move for Ang, he was pushed over the edge and it was hot how he said things. No more hiding the truth or it all; he wanted this woman for 8 damn years and was going to get her without bullshit!

I love this story. It had a good beginning and AN ENDING!!!!!!!!

There are so many stories started years ago on Literotica that leave you hanging.

Thanks for giving us readers a complete story!!!!!

I like the fact that all of your storys are connected. Thats really cool.