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So many mundane details missed in getting ready for another day's daily grind, the worst part being the scraping of ice off the car's windows.
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Great read, nice rhythm, crisp images, pulling back the curtain for a glimpse of a day in the life...brrr...thanks.
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This poem was mentioned in Saturday's New Poems Reviews.
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thanks...
i really needed that
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Definitely on auto pilot here!
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Two things I like about you, your sense of rhythm, and everything I reread your poetry, the meaning seems to shift, I was going to say I don't like this (blah, blah) but it seems like it was there for a reason, I haven't quite got a fix on it, and that is a very good thing. IMHO
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