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well some would say, too many abstactions, too much "stupid inner self", I agree to a point, some of it could be changed, but then I'd be reading Roethke or Snyder, but them if I wanted to read Roethke or Snyder, I wouldn't be reading you.

Nicely done cerebral & metaphorical imagery — now isn't that a mouthful!