If the wife has no respect for the soon to be divorced husband or care for him in anyway why invite him into her house and basically abuse him mentally why not just let him find a nursing home somewhere let him pay the bill and then have a life with marcus which it seems to me your heading towards or better yet if the wife really want's rid of him get the ex-wife to pick him up and care for him. You don't really need to go into chapter upon chapter about how she now likes teasing someone who she apparently cares nothing for. Apart from the things I mentioned( and please these are just MY opinions) good writing.Even though I get the idea of the story I don't agree with torture just for the sake of it.
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Anonymous12/30/07
No Point
I see no point in dragging this out ,it could be a very erotic story indeed ,the almost sadistic actions of this woman is stopping it dead in its tracks.
English
Teasing
Teasing,you can have to much of it you know
Why..
If the wife has no respect for the soon to be divorced husband or care for him in anyway why invite him into her house and basically abuse him mentally why not just let him find a nursing home somewhere let him pay the bill and then have a life with marcus which it seems to me your heading towards or better yet if the wife really want's rid of him get the ex-wife to pick him up and care for him. You don't really need to go into chapter upon chapter about how she now likes teasing someone who she apparently cares nothing for. Apart from the things I mentioned( and please these are just MY opinions) good writing.Even though I get the idea of the story I don't agree with torture just for the sake of it.
No Point
I see no point in dragging this out ,it could be a very erotic story indeed ,the almost sadistic actions of this woman is stopping it dead in its tracks.
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