All Comments on 'Ms. Croft'

Just a great start, it looks promising...and I hope there are a lot of apartments in Lara's manor... Thanks

Good buildup (love the detail and time you spent on the whiskey) and an excellent payoff (anything involving tit fucking gets my attention quick) I look forward to further chapters, please don't make us wait long :)

She isn't a commoner, you know.

I like how it dosn't start off with something sexual or something like that, great job, I can't wait for more stories based on her or other video game characters...speaking of which I like how you portrayed Lara Croft in a manner as if she was a real person, and not "I was playing my video game one day and blah blah blah."

This is one of the hottest stories I've ever read. Loved the detailed descriptions of Ms Croft. Please, please please either continue this one, or do more stories about the lovely Lara!

Great story, your descriptions are really sensational and your writing is deliciously sensuous. Usually I don't tend to like second-person stories but yours is very good and like all good stories leaves us readers waiting for more

this story is spectacular, but too short! I can tell you have a creative brain and I know you have to have another chapter in the works! Don't keep us in suspense!

The second chapter is just about finished! I have a nice little plot all worked out in my head (that could lead to more than just two chapters) and it's almost ready to be posted. If anyone wants it early they can email me and I'll send it to them

I love lara croft/angelina jolie and I love the elegance with which she was dressed in this story. Please continue, and don't forget to pleasure the lady Croft as well ;)

For the love of Lara: please post the second chapter soon! :D

I just had to say how much I enjoyed this one. VERY nicely written. So glad I decided to check out the celebrities toplist :)

Nice writing. Your attention 2 detail is Masterful. I think tit-fucking is Wonderful & LADY Croft is built 4 it, indeed!

More Croft-y exploits, please. LOL

Big hard kudoes 2 U 4 this episode 2!

Mmm

HOORAY FOR BOOBIES!!!

fantastic. classy yet not without grit, v well written