All Comments on 'posture pedic'

that was different. And nicely done.

the title should have been "Pasture Pedic."...But never the less it was an interesting poem, thanks.

Again, some fine phrasing. I almost had a doubt about the title but on second thought, naming it <i>pasture pedic</i> comes off as trivializing the poem with a rather cutesy title; leave it as is.